我们的修改案例频繁被一些中介盗用。为保护团队的知识产权，从本期开始，本系列只点评原文，修改后实例将只对经过留学身份审核的学弟学妹开放。

During my four-year undergraduate study, I have always put study as my priority.

◆ 第一句用词及句型都属于baby language；

◆ 为无效语句,这种junk statement在文书修改中属于必删内容。

Although I find it a little challenged to gain a full understanding of the courses at first since it was a completely new domain for me to learn. But I still hold the belief that as long as we want it enough, we can definitely work it out.

I still remember vividly that the first time I came across the C language programming, I couldn’t figure out how the whole program was written out. Thus, I came to search every possible area which were related to this. I bought reference books like the fundamental programming skills and the grammarrules of C. I've devoted plenty of time to do the preview and review of the core courses.

Within several class, I managed to develop a simple calculating system all by myself when the others were still trying to master the basic law of the C program.

Besides, I’m kind of a perfectionist.

It was in the Internet technology and application class, our teacher made an assignment of making a piece of film about life experiences.

A bunch of my classmates choose to make a perfunctory effort because of the limited time. While I decided since we have to complete it, why not do our best? So I spend a whole day sitting in front of my laptop to make a delicate animation.

◆ 又是与他人比较凸显自己的能力；

◆ 反问式语句要不得；

◆ 最后一句仍然无法显示自己能力，这种hard-working是谁都可以具有的；

◆ 本文中没有一个实例可以证明自身独特能力。